11:7 When a wicked person dies, his expectation perishes, 1
and the hope of his strength 2 perishes. 3
13:12 Hope 4 deferred 5 makes the heart sick, 6
but a longing fulfilled 7 is like 8 a tree of life.
1 tn The first colon features an imperfect tense depicting habitual action, while the second has a perfect tense verb depicting gnomic action.
2 tc There are several suggested changes for this word אוֹנִים (’onim, “vigor” or “strength”). Rashi, a Jewish scholar who lived
3 tc The LXX adds an antithesis to this: “When the righteous dies, hope does not perish.” The LXX translators wanted to see the hope of the righteous fulfilled in the world to come.
4 sn The word “hope” (תּוֹחֶלֶת [tokhelet] from יָחַל [yakhal]) also has the implication of a tense if not anxious wait.
5 tn The verb is the Pual participle from מָשַׁךְ (mashakh,“to draw; to drag”).
6 sn Failure in realizing one’s hopes can be depressing or discouraging. People can bear frustration only so long (W. G. Plaut, Proverbs, 153).
7 tn Heb “a desire that comes”; cf. CEV “a wish that comes true.”
8 tn The comparative “like” does not appear in the Hebrew text, but is implied by the metaphor; it is supplied for the sake of clarity.