1:8 I was attentive that night and saw a man seated 1 on a red horse that stood among some myrtle trees 2 in the ravine. Behind him were red, sorrel, 3 and white horses.
6:3 Then 11 when the Lamb 12 opened the second seal, I heard the second living creature saying, “Come!” 6:4 And another horse, fiery red, 13 came out, and the one who rode it 14 was granted permission 15 to take peace from the earth, so that people would butcher 16 one another, and he was given a huge sword.
6:5 Then 17 when the Lamb opened the third seal I heard the third living creature saying, “Come!” So 18 I looked, 19 and here came 20 a black horse! The 21 one who rode it 22 had a balance scale 23 in his hand.
1 tn Heb “riding,” but since this verb in English is usually associated with horses in motion rather than standing still, the translation uses “seated.” Cf. NAB “the driver of a red horse.”
2 tc The LXX presupposes הֶהָרִים (heharim, “mountains”) rather than the MT הַהֲדַסִּים (hahadassim, “myrtles”), probably because of reference to the ravine. The MT reading is preferred and is followed by most English versions.
3 sn The Hebrew שְׂרֻקִּים (sÿruqqim) means “red” (cf. NIV, NCV, NLT “brown”). English translations such as “speckled” (KJV) or “dappled” (TEV) are based on the reading of the LXX (ψαροί) that attempts to bring the color of this horse into conformity with those described in Zech 6:2-3. However, since these are two different and unrelated visions, this is a methodological fallacy.
4 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “so” to indicate the implied result of hearing the voice summon the first rider.
5 tc The reading “and I looked” (καὶ εἶδον, kai eidon) or some slight variation (e.g., ἶδον, idon) has excellent ms support ({א A C P 1611}) and its omission seems to come through the
6 tn The phrase “and here came” expresses the sense of καὶ ἰδού (kai idou).
7 tn Here καί (kai) has not been translated because of differences between Greek and English style.
8 tn Grk “the one sitting on it.”
9 sn See the note on the word crown in Rev 3:11.
10 tn The participle νικῶν (nikwn) has been translated as substantival, the subject of the verb ἐξῆλθεν (exhlqen). Otherwise, as an adverbial participle of manner, it is somewhat redundant: “he rode out conquering and to conquer.”
11 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “then” to indicate the implied sequence of events within the vision.
12 tn Grk “he”; the referent (the Lamb) has been specified in the translation for clarity here and throughout the rest of the chapter.
13 tn L&N 79.31 states, “‘fiery red’ (probably with a tinge of yellow or orange).”
14 tn Grk “the one sitting on it.”
15 tn The word “permission” is implied; Grk “it was given to him to take peace from the earth.”
16 tn BDAG 979 s.v. σφάζω states, “Of the killing of a person by violence…σφάζειν τινά butcher or murder someone (4 Km 10:7; Jer 52:10; Manetho: 609 fgm. 8, 76 Jac. [in Jos., C. Ap. 1, 76]; Demetr.[?]: 722 fgm. 7; Ar. 10, 9) 1J 3:12; Rv 6:4. Pass. (Hdt. 5, 5) 5:9; 6:9; 18:24.”
17 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “then” to indicate the implied sequence of events within the vision.
18 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “so” to indicate the implied result of the summons by the third creature.
19 tc The reading “and I looked” (καὶ εἶδον, kai eidon) or some slight variation (e.g., ἶδον, idon) has excellent ms support ({א A C P 1611}) and its omission seems to have come through the
20 tn The phrase “and here came” expresses the sense of καὶ ἰδού (kai idou).
21 tn Here καί (kai) has not been translated because of differences between Greek and English style.
22 tn Grk “the one sitting on it.”
23 sn A balance scale would have been a rod held by a rope in the middle with pans attached to both ends for measuring.
24 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “then” to indicate the implied sequence of events within the vision.
25 tn For the translation of διάδημα (diadhma) as “diadem crown” see L&N 6.196.
26 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “so” to indicate the implied result of the angel’s invitation to witness the fate of the prostitute.
27 tn Or “in the spirit.” “Spirit” could refer either to the Holy Spirit or the human spirit, but in either case John was in “a state of spiritual exaltation best described as a trance” (R. H. Mounce, Revelation [NICNT], 75).
28 tn Or “desert.”
29 tn The word “there” is not in the Greek text, but is supplied for stylistic reasons.