2 Samuel 22:2-3

22:2 He said:

“The Lord is my high ridge, ¹  my stronghold, ²  my deliverer.

22:3 My God ³  is my rocky summit where I take shelter, ⁴ 

my shield, the horn that saves me, ⁵  my stronghold,

my refuge, my savior. You save me from violence! ⁶ 

2 Samuel 22:40-48

22:40 You give me strength for battle; ⁷ 

you make my foes kneel before me. ⁸ 

22:41 You make my enemies retreat; ⁹ 

I destroy those who hate me.

22:42 They cry out, ¹⁰  but there is no one to help them; ¹¹ 

they cry out to the Lord, ¹²  but he does not answer them.

22:43 I grind them as fine as the dust of the ground;

I crush them and stomp on them like clay ¹³  in the streets.

22:44 You rescue me from a hostile army; ¹⁴ 

you preserve me as a leader of nations;

people over whom I had no authority are now my subjects. ¹⁵ 

22:45 Foreigners are powerless before me; ¹⁶ 

when they hear of my exploits, they submit to me. ¹⁷ 

22:46 Foreigners lose their courage; ¹⁸ 

they shake with fear ¹⁹  as they leave ²⁰  their strongholds. ²¹ 

22:47 The Lord is alive! ²² 

My protector ²³  is praiseworthy! ²⁴ 

The God who delivers me ²⁵  is exalted as king! ²⁶ 

22:48 The one true God completely vindicates me; ²⁷ 

he makes nations submit to me. ²⁸ 

Jeremiah 16:19

16:19 Then I said, ²⁹ 

“Lord, you give me strength and protect me.

You are the one I can run to for safety when I am in trouble. ³⁰ 

Nations from all over the earth

will come to you and say,

‘Our ancestors had nothing but false gods –

worthless idols that could not help them at all. ³¹ 

[22:2]  ¹ tn Traditionally “is my rock”; CEV “mighty rock”; TEV “is my protector.” This metaphor pictures God as a rocky, relatively inaccessible summit, where one would be able to find protection from enemies. See 1 Sam 23:25, 28.

[22:2]  ² tn Traditionally “my fortress”; TEV “my strong fortress”; NCV “my protection.”

[22:3]  ³ tc The translation (along with many English versions, e.g., NAB, NIV, NRSV, NLT) follows the LXX in reading אֱלֹהִי (’elohi, “my God”) rather than MT’s אֱלֹהֵי (’elohe, “the God of”). See Ps 18:2.

[22:3]  ⁴ tn Or “in whom.”

[22:3]  ⁵ tn Heb “the horn of my salvation,” or “my saving horn.”

[22:3]  ⁶ tn The parallel version of the song in Ps 18 does not include this last line.

[22:40]  ⁷ tn Heb “you clothed me with strength for battle.”

[22:40]  ⁸ tn Heb “you make those who rise against me kneel beneath me.”

[22:41]  ⁹ tn Heb “and [as for] my enemies, you give to me [the] back [or “neck” ].” The idiom “give [the] back” means “to cause [one] to turn the back and run away.” See Exod 23:27 and HALOT 888 s.v. II ערף.

[22:42]  ¹⁰ tc The translation follows one medieval Hebrew ms and the ancient versions in reading the Piel יְשַׁוְּעוּ (yÿshavvÿ’u, “they cry for help”) rather than the Qal of the MT יִשְׁעוּ (yish’u, “they look about for help”). See Ps 18:41 as well.

[22:42]  ¹¹ tn Heb “but there is no deliverer.”

[22:42]  ¹² tn The words “they cry out” are not in the Hebrew text. This reference to the psalmists’ enemies crying out for help to the Lord suggests that the psalmist refers here to enemies within the covenant community, rather than foreigners. However, the militaristic context suggests foreign enemies are in view. Ancient Near Eastern literature indicates that defeated enemies would sometimes cry out for mercy to the god(s) of their conqueror. See R. B. Chisholm, “An Exegetical and Theological Study of Psalm 18/2 Samuel 22” (Th.D. diss., Dallas Theological Seminary, 1983), 271.

[22:43]  ¹³ tn Or “mud” (so NAB, NIV, CEV). See HALOT 374 s.v. טִיט.

[22:44]  ¹⁴ tn Heb “from the strivings of my people.” In this context רִיב (riv, “striving”) probably has a militaristic sense (as in Judg 12:2; Isa 41:11), and עַם (’am, “people”) probably refers more specifically to an army (for other examples, see the verses listed in BDB 766 s.v. עַם 2.d). The suffix “my” suggests David is referring to attacks by his own countrymen, the “people” being Israel. However, the parallel text in Ps 18:43 omits the suffix.

[22:44]  ¹⁵ tn Heb “a people whom I did not know serve me.” In this context the verb “know” (יָדַע, yada’) probably refers to formal recognition by treaty. People who were once not under the psalmist’s authority now willingly submit to his rulership to avoid being conquered militarily (see vv. 45-46). The language may recall the events recorded in 2 Sam 8:9-10 and 10:19.

[22:45]  ¹⁶ tn For the meaning “to be weak; to be powerless” for the verb כָּחַשׁ (kakhash), see Ps 109:24. Verse 46, which also mentions foreigners, favors this interpretation. Another option is to translate “cower in fear” (see Deut 33:29; Pss 66:3; 81:15).

[22:45]  ¹⁷ tn Heb “at a report of an ear they submit to me.” The report of David’s exploits is so impressive that those who hear it submit to his rulership without putting up a fight.

[22:46]  ¹⁸ tn Heb “wither, wear out.”

[22:46]  ¹⁹ tc The translation assumes a reading וְיַחְרְגוּ (vÿyakhrÿgu, “and they quaked”) rather than the MT וְיַחְגְּרוּ (vÿyakhgÿru, “and they girded themselves”). See the note at Ps 18:45.

[22:46]  ²⁰ tn Heb “from.”

[22:46]  ²¹ tn Heb “prisons.” Their besieged cities are compared to prisons.

[22:47]  ²² tn Elsewhere the construction חַי־יְהוָה (khay-yÿhvah) as used exclusively as an oath formula, but this is not the case here, for no oath follows. Here the statement is an affirmation of the Lord’s active presence and intervention. In contrast to pagan deities, he demonstrates that he is the living God by rescuing and empowering the psalmist.

[22:47]  ²³ tn Heb “my rocky cliff,” which is a metaphor for protection.

[22:47]  ²⁴ tn Or “blessed [i.e., praised] be.”

[22:47]  ²⁵ tn Heb “the God of the rock of my deliverance.” The term צוּר (tsur, “rock”) is probably accidentally repeated from the previous line. The parallel version in Ps 18:46 has simply “the God of my deliverance.”

[22:47]  ²⁶ tn The words “as king” are supplied in the translation for clarification. In the Psalms the verb רוּם (rum, “be exalted”) when used of God, refers to his exalted position as king (Pss 99:2; 113:4; 138:6) and/or his self-revelation as king through his mighty deeds of deliverance (Pss 21:13; 46:10; 57:5, 11).

[22:48]  ²⁷ tn Heb “The God is the one who grants vengeance to me.” The plural form of the noun “vengeance” indicates degree here, suggesting complete vengeance or vindication. In the ancient Near East military victory was sometimes viewed as a sign that one’s God had judged in favor of the victor, avenging and/or vindicating him. See, for example, Judg 11:27, 32-33, 36.

[22:48]  ²⁸ tn Heb “and [is the one who] brings down nations beneath me.”

[16:19]  ²⁹ tn The words “Then I said” are not in the text. They are supplied in the translation to show the shift from God, who has been speaking to Jeremiah, to Jeremiah, who here addresses God.

[16:19]  ³⁰ tn Heb “O Lord, my strength and my fortress, my refuge in the day of trouble. The literal which piles up attributes is of course more forceful than the predications. However, piling up poetic metaphors like this adds to the length of the English sentence and risks lack of understanding on the part of some readers. Some rhetorical force has been sacrificed for the sake of clarity.

[16:19]  ³¹ tn Once again the translation has sacrificed some of the rhetorical force for the sake of clarity and English style: Heb “Only falsehood did our ancestors possess, vanity and [things in which?] there was no one profiting in them.”