Daniel 1:8-16

1:8 But Daniel made up his mind ¹  that he would not defile ²  himself with the royal delicacies or the royal wine. ³  He therefore asked the overseer of the court officials for permission not to defile himself. 1:9 Then God made the overseer of the court officials sympathetic to Daniel. ⁴  1:10 But he ⁵  responded to Daniel, “I fear my master the king. He is the one who has decided ⁶  your food and drink. What would happen if he saw that you looked malnourished in comparison to the other young men your age? ⁷  If that happened, ⁸  you would endanger my life ⁹  with the king!” 1:11 Daniel then spoke to the warden ¹⁰  whom the overseer of the court officials had appointed over Daniel, Hananiah, Mishael, and Azariah: 1:12 “Please test your servants for ten days by providing us with some vegetables to eat and water to drink. 1:13 Then compare our appearance ¹¹  with that of ¹²  the young men who are eating the royal delicacies; ¹³  deal with us ¹⁴  in light of what you see.” 1:14 So the warden ¹⁵  agreed to their proposal ¹⁶  and tested them for ten ¹⁷  days.

1:15 At the end of the ten days their appearance was better and their bodies were healthier ¹⁸  than all the young men who had been eating the royal delicacies. 1:16 So the warden removed the delicacies and the wine ¹⁹  from their diet ²⁰  and gave them a diet of vegetables instead.

[1:8]  ¹ tn Heb “placed on his heart.”

[1:8]  ² tn Or “would not make himself ceremonially unclean”; TEV “become ritually unclean.”

[1:8]  ³ tn Heb “with the delicacies of the king and with the wine of his drinking.”

[1:9]  ⁴ tn Heb “Then God granted Daniel loyal love and compassion before the overseer of the court officials.” The expression “loyal love and compassion” is a hendiadys; the two words combine to express one idea.

[1:10]  ⁵ tn Heb “The overseer of the court officials.” The subject has been specified in the translation for the sake of clarity.

[1:10]  ⁶ tn Heb “assigned.” See v. 5.

[1:10]  ⁷ tn Heb “Why should he see your faces thin from the young men who are according to your age?” The term translated “thin” occurs only here and in Gen 40:6, where it appears to refer to a dejected facial expression. The word is related to an Arabic root meaning “be weak.” See HALOT 277 s.v. II זעף.

[1:10]  ⁸ tn The words “if that happened” are not in the Hebrew text but have been added in the translation for clarity.

[1:10]  ⁹ tn Heb “my head.” Presumably this is an implicit reference to capital punishment (cf. NCV, TEV, CEV, NLT), although this is not entirely clear.

[1:11]  ¹⁰ sn Having failed to convince the overseer, Daniel sought the favor of the warden whom the overseer had appointed to care for the young men.

[1:13]  ¹¹ tn Heb “let our appearance be seen before you.”

[1:13]  ¹² tn Heb “the appearance of.”

[1:13]  ¹³ tn Heb “delicacies of the king.” So also in v. 15.

[1:13]  ¹⁴ tn Heb “your servants.”

[1:14]  ¹⁵ tn Heb “he”; the referent (the warden mentioned in v. 11) has been specified in the translation for clarity.

[1:14]  ¹⁶ tn Heb “listened to them with regard to this matter.”

[1:14]  ¹⁷ sn The number ten is sometimes used in the OT as an ideal number of completeness. Cf. v. 20; Zech 8:23; Rev 2:10.

[1:15]  ¹⁸ tn Heb “fat of flesh”; KJV, ASV “fatter in flesh”; NASB, NRSV “fatter” (although this is no longer a sign of health in Western culture).

[1:16]  ¹⁹ tn Heb “the wine of their drinking.”

[1:16]  ²⁰ tn The words “from their diet” are not in the Hebrew text but have been added in the translation for clarity.