Judges 5:20

5:20 From the sky ¹  the stars ²  fought,

from their paths in the heavens ³  they fought against Sisera.

Judges 5:4

5:4 O Lord, when you departed ⁴  from Seir,

when you marched from Edom’s plains,

the earth shook, the heavens poured down,

the clouds poured down rain. ⁵ 

[5:20]  ¹ tn Or “from heaven.” The Hebrew term שָׁמַיִם (shamayim) may be translated “heaven(s)” or “sky” depending on the context.

[5:20]  ² tn The MT takes “the stars” with what follows rather than with the first colon of v. 20. But for metrical reasons it seems better to move the atnach and read the colon as indicated in the translation.

[5:20]  ³ tn The words “in the heavens” are not in the Hebrew text, but are supplied for clarity and for stylistic reasons.

[5:4]  ⁴ tn Or “went out.”

[5:4]  ⁵ tn Heb “water.”